This is the year of dark and moist forests
of your smile piercing branches
when the moon is too big to see
what is really hidden
On a complementary day
yellow + purple
you lifted your fingers to say hi
they spelled victory
I read two, I read light
Two days before we had tea
yellow, red
if we are to give things their real names
2+3=5
just like they make purple
to my unbalanced eyesight
just like
they make sense
The coming year is one of sherbet
mango, strawberry
soft-colored on your palate
acrid on mine
because I am addicted to the brownish kind of
stories
As the moon decreases it shows
how much of ourselves
so that taste and color
can melt one into another
so that we can add numbers
to each other’s presence
***
Written for today’s Meeting the Bar, where Victoria C. Slotto invited us to write about synesthesia, which I have a very mild form (every digit has its color).
so we can add numbers to each others presense….lovely close on this…like how you use complimentary colors in this as well…and the play with those that blend to make others…make things, make sense…and sounds like some sweet tasting days in the coming seasons…i’ll take some sherbet to cleanse my palette….
Thanks, Brian! That’s it: I wanted to write a poem about summer and love.
I like that last stanza and the way you suggest the blending of each other. Nice.
Pamela
Thank you!
Je l’aime, bien, Aimee. I love that you shared with us your own experience with synesthsia. The way you incorporate complementary colors, the inclusion of 2+3, so many wonderful things about this poem. Loving it!
Thanks so much for such a meaningful prompt!
Love the opening lines until the last verse ~ The mix matching of colors and numbers are creatively done ~ I also like the brownish kind of stories, really well done here ~
Good to see you at D’verse ~
Grace
Thanks so much Grace!
yellow and purple
mango and strawberry
and then they all melt together… sweeeettt
Thanks! It does make us hungry, doesn’t it?
Lots of strawberries and moons in these synesthesia poems. J’aime! This is gorgeous. -Mike
Thank you! Great combo, strawberries and moon.
Wonderful Aimee such a nice summer feeling here… and I love the melting sherbet… very satisfying to read 🙂
Thank you Björn!
Intriguing – thanks for sharing your own experience and insight : )
Thank you!
…beautifully delicious take… after this i’m gonna be missing summer and the mangoes a lot as we are embracing the rainy season here… smiles…
Where do you live?
Here it is just beginning…
…philippines… and we only have 2 seasons here… the first half of the year celebrated summer season… and the rest will be the rainy part… quite long journey into the wet land… smiles…
j’aime ce poeme! (learning french ;))
beautiful poem, Aimee! love the colors,and ofcourse the moon. Stanza 1 is an absolute favorite!
Merci beaucoup! Bon courage pour le français!
A delight– « when the moon is too big to see what is really hidden » just beautiful–a summer song
Thank you so much! Yes, it was intended to be a summer poem, if not a song.