There was once a convoy heading for the West
bound together they were, of the same bones
lying down their path in front of their hooves
lying about their path as the snow would heave
they had packed up heaps of what they had but
as they had not much there was not much weight
piling on them as their feet were grinding what
was left of their fears and defeated minds
they had stories to count on to help them stay
awake and at stake – they had horror stories,
histories to recall and call on when all that was
was a vast no-one – they had fear possibilities
what was it that they found in them was it
a cord that laid consistency in front of them
was it blood that had them dream of a liquid to
grasp was it a gasp or was it an enchantment
there was snow cutting them down in their skin
there were horses refusing to live long and cold
there were hopes thrown like a handful of flakes
on a snow bank there was – a mere dying hand
they had an issue that was no exit they had
their own bodies and minds, restless chilled, blained
bones that they had ground finely until they were
part of the soil again part of the sole plain
they had
no other
escape
just like we had no other
when we met them drenched
covering their needs
on a pure floor
this def conveys an eerie feel…it made me think a bit of the story of the soccer team that crashed their plane in the mountains and ended up eating their dead to survive…so worn down and you stumbling upon them and you leave us there…nice open close allowing our imaginations to go from there…
In fact I was inspired by another cannibalism story, France Bequette’s… so you got it right 😉