Heaven (@asweetlust) dit :

2 mars 2013 à 20 h 46 min

Hot, hot, hot ~ I like the last two best, but all of them worked well together ~ The marvels of micro poetry ~

Nice to see you at D’verse ~

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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  2 mars 2013 à 20 h 48 min
  
  Thank you! I’m happy you like them… you the master of sexy poetry!
  
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brian miller dit :

2 mars 2013 à 21 h 08 min

dang…how very cool…tongue salty impule was a fav….oh heck…its all hot…smiles…

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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  2 mars 2013 à 21 h 19 min
  
  Hehe 🙂 Thanks a lot!
  
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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  3 mars 2013 à 13 h 20 min
  
  Hehe 😉 Thank you!!
  
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Ursa Bowers dit :

2 mars 2013 à 23 h 00 min

HAWT 😉 I loved 5 and 6 the best, they really conjured interesting associations. These had an impulsive, illogical quality that I enjoyed– dreamlike and surreal,

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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  3 mars 2013 à 13 h 20 min
  
  Thanks a lot! « Illogical »… I like that! True!
  
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Kelvin S.M. dit :

3 mars 2013 à 2 h 28 min

…each rose different levels of intimacy… ah 3 words per set — cool (i mean hot)…hihi… liked the economy of emotions & imagination i had with each read… great… smiles…

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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  3 mars 2013 à 13 h 19 min
  
  Yes, they are meant to make you use your imagination! I’m glad you liked. Thank you!
  
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hobgoblin2011 dit :

3 mars 2013 à 2 h 40 min

these are great. So many variations of interpretation. i love triptychs, they’re a lot of fun to come up with and even more fun to read. Thanks for doing these for us tonight. Really enjoyed them.

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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  3 mars 2013 à 13 h 18 min
  
  Thank you, I really appreciated writing triptychs too and playing with the different meanings thet created!
  
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claudia dit :

3 mars 2013 à 3 h 41 min

hmmm…. the tongue salty impulse.. nice…..

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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  3 mars 2013 à 13 h 16 min
  
  Hehe 🙂 Thanks.
  
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Sabio Lantz dit :

3 mars 2013 à 6 h 21 min

Fantastic three-word tantalization — playfully devilish. Thanx
鬼が踊る

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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  3 mars 2013 à 13 h 16 min
  
  Thank YOU!
  
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Mohana dit :

3 mars 2013 à 10 h 46 min

hot!!! 🙂

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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  3 mars 2013 à 13 h 15 min
  
  Hehe 🙂
  
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) dit :

3 mars 2013 à 12 h 41 min

You are a master of short poetry 🙂 cheers

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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  3 mars 2013 à 13 h 15 min
  
  Thank you so much! I’m honoured.
  
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ManicDdaily dit :

5 mars 2013 à 23 h 47 min

This is just terrific. These are so playful and sensual and clever. Much enjoyed. One rather silly point – Manucare is manicure in English I think. I don’t know if you want to use the French word, but the spelling is a bit different in English – given the odd juxtaposition of the lines, you may wish to use the standard English spelling.

So cool. Thanks much. k.

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- hiroshimem dit :
  
  5 mars 2013 à 23 h 50 min
  
  Oh, thank you so much! Yes, I’ll correct it. Funny how sometimes French and English spellings are just similar enough… to be confusing
  
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