All these times I haven’t fed myself
when I needed to,
all this food denied
like there were no loads of bread
running from truck to gutter
in Austria or anywhere else
I haven’t been
’cause I was a ghost in those places
blown by wind and filled
with hunger.
Had you cracked me open like a hot chestnut
– with your gloves taken out and
the tip of your fingers reddened –
you’d have found a sweet,
sweet void,
repeating softly – or would it be the wind?
-, « She is empty.
She needs to be filled. »
You didn’t get that
but I did.
All these times I have fed more than myself
when anything else was needed,
all this space denied
like there were no loaves of flesh
running from bones to mouth
– or was it the other way around
too? –
in France and everywhere else
I have been
with the same body, unaware of the place
it had blown itself to
filled with
fleeting pastries.
Even you couldn’t open me up like a jar
of chestnut cream
with your slow hands all over and
your jaw all tense –
otherwise you’d have found a half-empty
paste,
with trails left by a knife on the sides.
« She’s emptying it out.
The sweetness of life. »
Yes, I once used a knife
but I got it anyway.
I once reached rock bottom
in a jar of spread
labeled with my fake room number
locked in a pantry high
in the basement low
in the city among all cities,
I once reached a hint of myself
down there
but it took time.
After all this time I got fed up with
needing not to need,
denying denying.
Like pouring sugar in a gutter
would make its contents edible,
like coating my life with cream
would make things possible.
I have been
to many places but now I want to go
for real, blown by my hunger,
with stomach open wide.
*Written for dVerse Poets Pub.*
What a gut wrenching write, I felt my stomach churning with the emptiness inside ~ good use of chestnut and jar, there are just some things we can’t deny ourselves ~ I applaud you for writing on such a sensitive issue with care ~
Thank you! A deeply important topic to me.
smiles….i always have the desire to go…to experience and to be in places….real evocative pice…love the broken open chestnut and the cream…both echoing an emptiness…and now you can go and be filled…smiles….ugh on the eating disorders though…i wrote on them earlier this week…that is some hard stuff…always trying to gain an appearance that is nearly impossible…
Yeah, eating disorders are hard stuff but need to be talked about. Bravo for doing it too! Thank you.
Wonderfully written.
Thank you!
wow…you touch a sensitive topic here in a very sensitive way…love the images you use..some quite painful.. and so good when there’s healing and i love the blown by hunger to go with a wide open stomach..
Yes, I wanted an ending that’s full of hope. Thank you!!
Such a powerful write. Empty inside but yet carrying the weight of the world, silently. That is the way with eating disorders. Your way with words is stunning.
Thank you so much!
Your poem carried me along throughout. Written with the depth of feeling only one who knows this experience from the inside would know. An important poem on a hard subject, but one we need to read about.
Thank you so much! How deeply appreciated.
Your piece has such strength. It’s such a hard topic to express well, but you’ve truly done so. I particularly liked the second stanza–the image of the fingers grasping the hot chestnut, and then the words on the wind–just beautiful. Thanks for sharing this one!
Thank you so much! Maybe because I’ve lived it from the inside… of the chestnut!