This has been a mascara-thick day
I covered my face with a domino
only half fulfilled
yet my lips in bloom
All day long I have been trying
to protect myself from your echo
eardrums half pierced
by midnight sounds high
Waiting in a wagon as sweet
as a ride in the dark with neon
stars plastered around
and lips singing tight
I have to conceal everything
but I do burst sometimes, and I did
leave murmurs, heart
broken laughters in air
Had I a cigarette I would gaze
at its lit butt till my holes for eyes
are damaged again
yet there’s the moon
And now she’s making up for lightness
with a shower of Perseid lights
perfidious heartstabbers
rotten leftovers
With my acid smile and moon-drenched
blackholes I look at changing cities
and the midnight rain
fades both our colours.
*** This poem has been written with M83’s Midnight City in my earplugs – memories of rain and light – full moon still impeding my… normality? – full moon still working shifts on me. I hope you see a star fall. If not, at least you have many beautifully sad poems to read, here at dVerse Poets Pub. Oh, and by the way, the pic was modified with Instagram, again. ***
I enjoyed the energy in your words, and there are a lot of cool images here. I especially like,
« All day long I have been trying to protect myself from your echo »
and
« With my acid smile and moon-drenched
blackholes I look at changing cities
and the midnight rain
fades both our colours. »
Oh, and I can’t forget about the ‘mascara-thick day’. Nicely done 🙂
Thank you! Images, energy… I’m keeping that!
Du grand toi, et in inglishe en plus!
Merci chère! Hé oui, je me dédouble… Prochain livre (et vie tout court) oblige!
nice write!!
Thank you!
yes I love « mascara-thick day » and « perfidious heartstabbers » …beautiful poem!
Thanks so much!
great images in this like..mascara-thick day…acid smile …moon-drenched
blackholes.. i love how you paint the mood with your words as well…felt.. and the pic is way cool…
Thank you Claudia!
yes beautiful and sad
The moon and stars always are.
perfidious heartstabbers
rotten leftovers, great phrasing that…staring at the cherry of the cigarette til you got holes in your eyes…i know just what you are saying there….you def mix the emotions well in this….very nice response…
Thank you Brian! This week’s theme sounded like it had been designed for me – for my day especially.
I like your description of the moon ~
And now she’s making up for lightness
with a shower of Perseid lights
perfidious heartstabbers
rotten leftovers
Lovely share ~
Thank you Heaven!
Absolutely beautiful! Thank you for sharing this. 🙂
Wow thank YOU!
Mini Aimee! Great take on the prompt….and I know exactly the feelings ou have created here…. Something about concealing one’s self whilst being concealed in a city….strange feeling…..and I love how you create that ‘beautifully sad’ mixture of the self and the nighttime city in all it’s midnight black, orange, and rain- doesnt get more melancholic than that- if I was to put this poem to a song- it would defo be ‘midnight in a perfect world’ by DJ Shadow…..nice again, loving your unique voice and writing style
Thank you so much Stuart! I don’t know how this happened but your comment got into the spam box… But I got to see it today, finally. Thanks for the music suggestion, I’m always eager to discover new music!
« This has been a mascara-thick day »
That is just incredibly cool!
Thanks so much! You know when your eyelashes stick together… that kind of day.
A fascinating poem– a touch of ambiguity within each image– but the melancholy comes through…xxxj http://parolavivace.blogspot.com — xxj
Ambiguity, melancholy: Exactly what I want my poems to tell. Your comment couldn’t hit better.
You had me at:
This has been a mascara-thick day
I especially love:
With my acid smile and moon-drenched
blackholes I look at changing cities
and the midnight rain
fades both our colours.
…emotive, quite good…
Thank you! I got emotive too, reading comments.
Amaing poem Aimée! I LOVE it!
Amazing poem Aimée! I just LOVE it!
Thank you Yolande! Always good to hear that from you! Thanks for your awesome support.
Thanks so much! You know when your eyelashes stick together… that kind of day.
acid smile! midnight rain!
1. i love midnight city (the song)
2. i love the perseids!
you, mon ami, are a genius.
But you are a genius too, then!