She had a purported sense of loneliness back then
back there,
a purposely avoidant stare
of the clearly ambiguous type.
As words were raging and raving
around her like unleashed katanas
or revolving doors,
she raced to hide into tapioca pearls
– the one time she had found some, debutante’s luck –
or apples as big as her face,
hesitant.
Buying food out of a 500 yen coin
biking it off,
soon biking from one konbini to another
without buying anything
’cause nothing was worth more than emptiness,
the sword-carved and stud-crafted sort.
She only had words and shame coming out,
an acid string she would fill her room with
in small bundles of well-known acrimony
Of the rigid type, she was
most unlike me this poem this story
telling with many directions and blunders
how she came to be me.
Okāsan had a pure sense of connection – she still has
even though she’s not okāsan anymore –
with her purple art stare-making
up the clearly extrovert type.
(I bet she, the one that’s I, became a little like her, the one that’s she
over time spent
and money in konbinis
over food that we did eat.
But I am skipping steps now,
avoiding the core
that’s essential
as usual.)
CORE (to be sung over and over, as there is no other verse to come):
As she made me list all the times in my life
I had been saved by luck or whatever
I wanted (it) to be,
she set a dim fire in my heart,
the one that tastes like matcha
gently rocking.
Then as if not enough she put out
my burning hand with hers,
and I can still feel raging and raving katanas,
a hurl of untouched coins,
my metallic bubble of fear shaken up
for not having been touched in eight months
(inside or outside).
*This poem, her/my story in Ōsaka, was written for dVerse Poets Pub, and will most probably be published in my upcoming ebook, Borders.
Just terrific poem – the tapioca pearls! Crazy, though of course, all so heartfelt, particular, vivid, sad, real. Very wonderful poem. k.
Thank you very much Karin! Yeah, tapioca pearls I found in the first convenience store I went to… but that have been nowhere to be found since! I see it as the way I judge(d?) other cultures quickly, on a 1st impression only…
this def needs a place in that book…love the inclusion of native terms…and that line with the mark outs is tight…and says much…you brought her to life…your close is so emotional as well…very nice…
Thank you so much Brian! That was a meaningful prompt to me.
wow… I can most definitely relate to this!
That’s awesome! Thank you.
A poem that demands more than one reading to fully appreciate the richness and impact. Very clever.
Thank you! That’s appreciated!
Vivid rich images …
Thank you!
My absolute favorite read so far tonight. Cannot wait for your book! You inspire the reader, as they read along in awe, always aware, that some mind created this, at the same enjoying the journey you lead us on. A tour of your process would be extroadinaire.
Wow, I am honoured, thank you! Well, it’s a bunch of references from a one-year stay mixed with deep emotions I guess… I think the most profound experiences can make good poems, especially when there’s hindsight (here, 10 years). I still think this poem is odd, but maybe it’s just because I am not completely at ease with its shape.
raw
Yes, I think that’s a good work to describe it.
wow..i just love the whole piece..the connections…how reality…esp. loved…Buying food out of a 500 yen coin
biking it off… mingles with what’s not seen, the thoughts, emotions…how the lines blur..my fav by yours that i read so far and def. this has to be in a book…
Wow, thank you so much!! I am touched.
Fab read …thank you x
Thank YOU! !
Very beautiful poem Aimée. The « tapioca pearls » also pulled me into your intense, eccentric, fine-tuned poetry. I love it!
Thank you Yolande! I love the words you used to describe my poetry… I’m honoured!
it just kicks you in the gut, like a karate kick. i also like the tapioca pearls
events cocatenated
Yeah! That’s awesome! Thank you!