I lay here apprehending the order of things
how the window enforces my view of peace
how the beams protect birds from the cat
how the light arrests every shape in their-
freeze-
I lay here apprehending
tension is mounting
the cat and I, sweating and swearing
under our broken breaths
where he detected power I
could only see laws, nature’s-
paws up-
freeze-
paws off-
I lay here within the order of things
how the squirrel ran away safely
how the fine glass maintained the protester in
how it prevented the cat from resting on
his stomach full with his view of peace
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All pictures have been modified with Instagram.
ha, really nice progressing in this and made me think well beyond the view out the window as well…the last stanza is a really tight summation…i like how you blend in the words of the police too…peace….there are moments…i am sure the birds and squirrel are happy to have found some in the shape of a window between them and the cat…smiles….nicely done…
Thank you! And you guessed right what job I was talking about!
heck…this is a clever piece…they don’t have an easy job at all…and good when things turn out well in the end.. really cool write..
Thank you. No they don’t, they’re stuck most of the time… trapped behind a glass or trapped in the wild.
I like your perspective of the job…both from the inside and outside. Very nice ~
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Thank you! Sometimes there’s just a fine line in between though…
I love the way you wrote this, the progression, the wording, the description; and the instagram pictures were phenomenal. Nice work all around.
Thank you so much! (and thanks to Instagram too)
Beautifully done and I love the pictures! Lovely… 🙂
Thank you so much!
This is really very clever. Your verbs of – I don’t know–policeman – work just terrifically here, not confining. Wonderful. k.
Thank you!! Exactly, police officer.
Lovely. I love the happy ending. The squirrel got away and the cat was content too 🙂
Cat’s are amazing, they deserve a poem or two or three. Thanks.
So true!
How very clever. This is truly free, both in form and in spirit, and with a theme of freedom versus restriction running through it. Well done indeed.
Thank you so much!! I guess animals are clever, and it just struck me 🙂
This is an amazing and haunting poem. I read it a couple of times and fell deeper under its spell.
There is much satisfaction in this, and not just in the peaceful ending….there is a ‘completeness’ to it…..I can’t find the exact words….
….but it is more than charming….it feeds the soul.
Lady Nyo
Oh wow, I am truly honoured. Thank you.